One of the easiest ways to make your writing more vivid is to remember that readers experience stories with more than their eyes. New writers often focus almost entirely on visual descriptions. They tell readers what a room looks like, what color someone's hair is, or what the weather is doing. While those details are important, real life is experienced through all five senses. Great descriptions allow readers to hear, smell, touch, and even taste the world you're creating.
Think about the difference between these two descriptions:
"The kitchen was old and messy."
Now compare that to:
"The smell of burnt coffee lingered in the air. Dirty dishes filled the sink, and the hum of the refrigerator mixed with the sound of rain tapping against the window. Sarah rested her hand on the cold countertop while taking a sip of bitter coffee she'd forgotten to sweeten."
Suddenly, readers aren't just…